comments/summary on classmates scary stories

Based on what I read I can conclude that these particular classmates are very talented in there writings because at some point I got goosebumps.

Hi Taylor,

i really liked the sentence "He fantasized about going to a fireplace and destroying it forever" because it really pops in the story and it fits well within the story. i really like the last sentence because i dont know about you but i thought it was funny.

Hi Laura,

i really like your story because it is very dark, and scary and that is one of the most defining feature.i also like the title because to me it calls me in and sits me down and tells me the story if that make sense.

HI jessie

i really like the flow of this story and the artistic effect the story leaves on me.i also think this story is really cool and sort of funny i guess but the details and humor is something that is nice within this story.