As I tucked her in, my daughter said “goodbye Daddy”. I
explained that at night we say “Goodnight” not “Goodbye, but she replied, “Not
tonight Daddy, tonight it’s Goodbye.” So as usual I shrug it off like its
nothing and continue on to my bedroom where my wife is awaiting for me in her
purple silk night gown. I crawl into bed and start to drift off slowly, quietly
with the T.V. still on in the background. I hear a noise from the living so I open
my eyes and look around as I’m wiping my eyes off. I get up and slowly walk
into the living room where there’s nothing happening or anything so I walk back
to my room half asleep. I crawl back in bed where even before my head hit the
pillow I was yet again in slumber where I was awoken by the crashing of
something in the hallway so I quickly turn the lamp on where I looked in to the
dark hallway where now I’m starting to get worried because this might mean that
there is someone in the house so I sprang out of bed and rushed into the hallway
where I was met with disappointment because there wasn’t a soul there so I muttered
to myself alright this time I’ll ignore it and just sleep so for the third time
I crawl into my warm bed where I began to sleep yet again until I felt like
someone was watching me which was a cliché thing for me to say but I was so
true so I barely opened my eyes when I saw my daughter standing there with her
eyes pointing right at me, just standing. So I picked her up and took her to
her room where I tucked her in and headed back to my room to finally sleep. I awoke
by someone standing there at the foot of our bed and for a second I knew that person
and I thought to myself and I was my wife’s sister who was brutally murdered by
some house intruder and as I started getting up she walked over grabbed my wife
broke her neck so bad that her neck bone was sticking out and the crack made me
cringe as her lifeless body hit the floor and out of the blue my sister in law
disappeared and the cops busted in yelling and screaming. They grabbed me and
handcuffed me and took me to the station where I was questioned intensely until
even though I knew I for a fact didn’t kill my wife I just said “fine I did it”
and I’m sitting her doing life for something I didn’t do even though the
evidence was stacked against me my DNA was on my wife so how could this be? My daughter
is in child protective service with a good life and I’m in here rotting every
day of the rest of my life and forever because of that one night.

This was a great story- I felt scared throughout the entire piece. I loved how you made the ghost seem human, and how the police took him without questioning. I also found it very sad that the man was ripped away from his daughter- maybe the ghost starts haunting her next?
ReplyDeleteOh wow. When I read the first line I thought it would be the daughter who disappeared...Nice twist to have it be the father who goes, and not to just death but to a horrible fate.
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